This is the poem from which I took the fragment Live. I’ve also added the audio recording.
In minor key
A droning tone
Wails the violin
Staccato of a drum
The restraints that bind
And bite into flesh
The metal is cold
The stone floor rough
The sting of your hand
I gasp at the blow
Sense your excitement
I pray to a god I don’t know
When harp strings plucked
Sound like the howl of a ghost
Blood seeps from my wounds
And I fear all is lost
When your breath in my ear
Asks for what I can’t give
I know your love is destruction
And I want to live
Artwork, words and vocals ~ Meg Sorick
I’d rather not have a destructive love.
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No, indeed.
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Love the art! Perfectly complimented your words. Terribly sad, yet beautiful, if that makes sense? 😊
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Thank you! I was a little anxious about posting this… didn’t want anyone thinking it was from personal experience! 😬
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Well, I was certainly hoping it wasn’t true, in your case. I’m sure it’s not a rare thing though. 😕
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I’m sure you’re right. 😞
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Unfortunately. Can’t imagine living in fear. 😔
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No I can’t either.
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Powerful, Meg! And the recording and art piece make it even more so! The sketch is stunning.
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Thank you! I reworked that raw poem from the other day. I was nervous about posting it though. I’m so glad you like it!
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Why?? It’s wonderful!
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Just that it’s so dark! 😳
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Ahhh. I like the variety! I’m glad you shared it.
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Very powerful, Meg – the darkness is felt
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Thank you Nathalie. I was anxious about posting it… hope no one would think it’s personal! 😳
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Oh I see! Well, I think people know that writers do use their imaginations a lot…but I can understand your concern. I don’t know why, but I didn’t assume it was personal when I read it. It just didn’t feel like that. To me anyway.
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Beautiful artwork and poetry, you have a lovely voice for recital Meg! 💜
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Thank you so much, Holly!
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Very powerful, and beautifully read.
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Thank you, Peter. The sketch inspired the poem.
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This is amazing. I can’t write this intense emotion without it being from at least second hand experience. I didn’t even read it, I listened to it and I love that you recorded it. I know your voice well, but it sent shivers up my spine as I listened. Extremely good.
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Thanks, Kevin. I had anxiety about this… hoping no one would assume personal experience. The sketch came first. I’m glad it affected you that way. Thanks so much
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You’re the best. Well, second best because I’m the best.
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Riiiiiiiiiight
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Meg, this poem is terrific and dark. Sort of a “Misery” type of love, very destructive. The artwork is wonderful, and I love the audio recording! A beautiful presentation! Please enjoy what’s left of your Sunday and have a good week ahead. ~ Mia 🙂
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Love it and the artwork
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Thanks, Brad. I’ve been enjoying the sketching. It soothes. I thought this all kinda went well together.
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It does – you do great work and lucky to know someone so talented. 😊
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Aw! Thank you! xo
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Welcome ❤
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