If I didn’t tell you, I bet you’d never guess that I pulled this out of a decades old notebook. I don’t remember exactly what inspired this poem, but it certainly stood the test of time. I was 14 when I wrote it.
War:
Soldiers fight on the sandy plain
So long a war, they’ve forgotten the cause
A generation gone insane
Ripped by the teeth of battle’s jaws
The only sounds are sighs and groans
Live and die with blood on their hands
And children born in battle zones
Become victims of marauding bands
Through ruined cities, the hot wind blows
Crumbling monuments of a culture once grand
Only the stones and fallen walls know
What started the slaughter out on the sand
Wow! You had such a healthy imagination at 14. Truly, if you hadn’t said so, I wouldn’t have guessed. You really did well keeping them all these years. It’s now that I wish I had kept my journals better. They would have made an interesting read. I do wonder what inspired these thoughts then.
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I’m not sure what was going on back then! I can’t recall but there was surely a conflict somewhere!
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It seemed so and your young mind made a craft of things 🙂
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You were very mature at 14!
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Only child! 😦 and my parents were older when they had me!
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That’s fantastic. You’ve now inspired me to find my old book of musings!
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Most of them are horrible! But there are a few gems mixed in!
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Have you been reading my work?!!!! Only joking.
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Your work is wonderful!
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😳Thank you.
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Now you’re waxing all poetic 🙂
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Alas poor Simon I’ve subjected you to my angst! 🙂
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I didn’t realise you had any…😜
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Fascinating. Thanks for sharing this gem. 🙂
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Glad you liked it!
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You’re right! I wouldn’t have thought this was written by someone who was only 14.
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I went through a phase where I was reaaaaallllly into poetry. And I was an only child, spent a lot of time alone!
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Oh me too! I wrote an entire book of them called ‘Path Of Pathos’
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You wrote that when you were 14? Now I am not all surprised that you decided to become a published author! 😀
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Thank you Rashmi! I was a very serious young lady!
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Wow! That’s really good!
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I had written a play on futility of war.. And I’m 15.. This goes so well with the play..! Do check it out if you find the time..
https://thecoolbookworm.wordpress.com/2015/07/14/small-play/
Loved the poem.. You’re way better than what I was a year ago :p
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Thank you so much! I will be sure to check out your play – that’s quite an accomplishment! Keep writing!
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🙂 😀 Thank you..!
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A war-themed poem..and it’s really touching
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Thank you!
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Wow Meg!
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