Broken hearted, he slowly walked away.
A challenge from Benedict Nicholson. This is a great exercise for writers who wish to be concise! And in that spirit, I’m done!
Six word story challenge: Loss
All my creative pursuits.
All my creative pursuits.
Broken hearted, he slowly walked away.
A challenge from Benedict Nicholson. This is a great exercise for writers who wish to be concise! And in that spirit, I’m done!
Meg Sorick, Author/Artist 
Lovely story, you’ve really captured the essence of his feeling. Hope you enjoyed the challenge!
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I did! Thanks for making us think!
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Wow, this was amazing!
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I think what makes this great is that he walks slowly – he wants to be called back. Lovely!
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Perfect!
Excellent flow of thoughts 🙂
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Thank you!
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I like that it was he who was broken hearted and not she! Great interpretation.
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Love your story. It’s amazing how much emotion you can pack into 6 words.
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