A ten sentence short story… I also think this one should be expanded before adding it to the collection. Some history between these old friends…
Every day Abraham Stein set up the chess board in the park. The game was always in progress, but Abraham never accepted offers to play. Every day he sat for an hour, staring at the board, not making a move. At the end of the hour, he would slide all the chess pieces back into the box, fold the board and walk the five blocks back to his apartment at Temple Beth Israel Retirement Home.
The ladies of Temple Beth Israel wondered about Abraham Stein, trying always to dissuade Abraham from his routine. As he walked each day to his appointment in the park, he would shoo them away with a wave of his hand.
One day, after some weeks had gone by, a man in a wheelchair was wheeled by his nurse to the place opposite Abraham in the park. Abraham smiled, without looking up from the board and said, “It’s about time you showed up.”
Saul Rosenberg snorted and said, “I missed you, too, you old meshuggener.”
Abraham pointed to the board and said, “It’s your move.”
Love this ❤
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Thanks Al!
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my sentiments exactly…
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Great little story. “Lo bueno, y breve, dos veces bueno.” Gracian. “Good and brief means twice as good.”
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Thank you so much!
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I play chess on the computer every day. Still waiting for that human opponent to turn up!
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Your 1st opponent won’t stand a chance!
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I’ll give them a break: I’ll play left-handed.
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😜
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Aw, two old friends! What a great story! ❤️
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Thank you!
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Awesome! 😃
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Thanks, Bud!!!
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You’re very welcome! 😃
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Love it. Whole story, so short. I think this is an exercise I’d like to try. If I remember… which lately, I suck at. 😀
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Yes, I think it helps us be concise. Hope you’re having a great weekend! 😃
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Yeah, it’s been pretty good… No plans today… which I kind of like… 🙂
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That is nice! We have some friends coming over any minute… 😬
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Love this, Meg!
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Wonderful!
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Thank you!
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Wow! That’s a wonderful story of a great friendship by thebackdrop of a game of chess!
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Great story, Meg and a wonderful exercise!
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Thanks, Diane! Makes you write concisely!
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Wow, I didn’t expect that. His Chess partner must be real special 🙂
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Dear old friends!
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Heart warming. Yeah, I know – such a cliché. Hey-ho. 🙂
Robert.
Oh and by the way – I love the quote on your header. Last year I finally finished collecting all of John Irving’s books and then I read them – one after the other. It was quite an experience – that guy has really grown some over his writing career. Thanks for reminding me. 🙂
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That’s wonderful! I recently changed the blog title and tagline. I used to have an Oscar Wilde Quote – “She tried to look picturesque, but only succeeded in being untidy.” But while funny, wasn’t reflective of my blog content! The Irving quote is far more appropriate for this mid life crisis I call authorship! 😀
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Hahaha – that’s funny. You’re funny! 😀
I did wonder why someone made a comment about Oscar Wilde – it all makes sense now.
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The blog title used to be: Meg Sorick writes better than she dresses… also terribly undignified! 😀
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Images going through my mind, none of which are dignified enough to share. 😉
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Hahaha! Thank you, I’m sure!
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If you saw the images, you might not de so … 😉
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😃😃😃
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Love this. I like to stop and watch the old men in the park playing chess. Figure I will be one of them one day.
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It’s a sweet thing, isn’t I? I bet a lot of them are old friends! 😊
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Yeah, I used to sit with them and hear stories about their youth. Wonderful times.
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Aw, that’s amazing!
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This is cool. You write the game I like to see the text.
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Thank you. You mean the move by move game?
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Awesome..keep it
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Thank you. I will keep it, just maybe add to it a little!
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Yea ..try always to improve..so do I ..
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A moving story of patience and friendship.
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Thank you so much!
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A heart touching story, Meg.
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Thank you!
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Sounds like the start of a Roald Dahl story!
I have a blog on chess improvement if anyone is interested: https://getgoodatchess.wordpress.com/2018/02/14/getting-started
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How sweet! I love this story! ~amy
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Thank you so much, Amy!
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