Double Seduction (14)

Fictional Kevin and I have collaborated on Double Seduction: a novella of suspense. We both hope you have enjoyed this story.  Because this is the last chapter!  Find the previous chapters here.

Chapter 14 – The Solution

“The rope, Melody. Get it, now!” Anton commanded.

Mel, still in shock and reeling from what had just happened —from what she had done— shook herself into action. “The rope, the rope, the rope,” she repeated, willing herself to move. She stumbled toward the SUV while Anton lifted David from the ground and hoisted him over his shoulder.

Anton thanked the weather gods for the cold and drizzle that had kept the joggers and dog walkers at home. Hopefully the gods would continue to smile upon them today. The nearby woods, fifty feet away would provide ideal cover and a solution to the problem at hand. The problem. The solution. Anton was an expert at dealing with problems. It was what he did, it was who he was. This was just another mission for him, albeit with more personal consequences if he failed. He could not fail. Not for Melody. Not if he was to have her for his own.

A few dozen paces into the grove of dense trees, Anton found his solution— a stately old sycamore tree with a thick branch about twelve feet from the ground. Anton laid David’s limp form at the base of the tree and searched him. His cell phone was in the right rear pocket of his khakis. Anton swiped it open and scrolled through the few pathetic contacts David had stored, till he found one he could use. “Mom.”

He quickly scanned some their recent exchanges to assess the tone of David’s interactions with his mother. This had to be perfect or it would all fall to pieces. He typed, “Mom, I’m sorry. Life’s a bitch and then you die. I’m just speeding up the process.” Good. That had just the kind of snarky tone that David had used with his mother. Why would his last words be any different?

Anton wiped the phone clean with the hem of his t-shirt and placed the phone in David’s hand to get fresh prints on it before tucking it back in his rear pocket. Where the hell was Melody? Leaving David where he lay, Anton returned to the edge of the woods to watch for her.

Mel’s hand slipped on the wet door handle. She was shaking so hard, she could barely keep a grip on it. She squeezed her eyes shut, pressed a fist to her sternum and took deep calming breaths. Just like Anton had taught her. There. Better. Focus. Behind the driver’s seat on the floor was the coil of nylon rope. Mel grabbed it and ran back to the spot where she’d left Anton with David. Anton called to her from the woods. “Melody, this way.”

Following the sound of his voice, she found him several paces in, out of sight of the fountain and walking path. He took the rope and grabbed her hand, pulling her further into the woods.

“Anton, wait,” she gasped. “We can’t do this. We can’t.”

“Melody, trust me, this is the best way…” He spun her around to face him. “It is the only way,” he stated, gripping her arms. Giving her a little shake, he growled, “I will deal with this. You will remain calm. Just do as I say.”

He released her with a final shake that had her stumbling back and falling to the ground. Anton returned to his mission, dropping to his knees beside the still form of David. Uncoiling the rope, he continued, “Who do you think will have to answer for this, eh? Do you realize what could happen if you call the police? They will investigate. They will read everything that you have written to one another. They will conclude that it was a lover’s spat, Melody. They will think that you killed him in anger.”

“But… but… Anton, it was self defense,” she said, her voice shaking. “I didn’t mean to kill him. He… he was going to hit me. I… I just did what you trained me to do…”

“I know that. You know that. Will the police believe you?” He shrugged. “Maybe, maybe not. You run the risk of arrest, possibly prison depending on what they conclude.”

“Anton, you saw the whole thing,” she added quickly. “You can tell them what happened. You saw him attack me.” Her voice rose in desperation. “You can tell them…”

Anton ignored her. No he would not ‘tell them.’ He hadn’t counted on such a perfect solution to this dilemma. But here it was. The rival eliminated, the white knight could come to her rescue. And Melody would be forever bound to him over their shared secret.

Concentrate on the mission, he thought. He tossed the rope over the tree limb and wound it around the trunk. He had hoped Melody would help. She was too rattled to be of any use. He would do it alone.

Anton had tied a slipknot in the rope. He looped the rope around David’s neck and lifted him up to a sitting position. David Twitchell’s eyes flickered and he took a ragged sucking breath.

“Oh my god, he’s alive!” Mel gasped. She covered her mouth, the taste of rising bile at the back of her throat.

Then she watched in horror as Anton hauled him up by the rope, cutting off the already badly restricted airway until David, clawing at the rope, his eyes bulging and wild, his face turning a ghastly shade of purple, finally breathed his last. He swung back and forth on the improvised gallows like the pendulum of a clock. Only it felt as time were standing still. Mel didn’t move. Couldn’t move. Anton glanced at her and said, “Wait here. There is one more thing I need.”

Moments later —it felt like hours— Anton returned with a thick tree stump and placed it near enough to the swinging body to make it appear like David had stood on it before kicking it out of the way. Anton stepped back for a moment, his eyes darting over the entire scene. Yes, he thought. It all fit. An obvious suicide. No need to look further.

“Come on Melody,” he said, reaching for her hand. “We will go back to my house. I will take care of you.”

Tears rolled down Mel’s cheeks. “You could’ve saved him. Why? Why, Anton? Why didn’t you save him?”

Anton pulled her to her feet, gathered her into his arms. “I saved you, Melody. I did all of it for you. And now you belong to me.”

92 thoughts on “Double Seduction (14)

  1. Sign me up for the cookbook. And the workout.

    This is awesome! I was suspicious of Anton but did not quite expect this. Amazing writing. You, too, Kevin. Makes me think maybe I need a partner. But I don’t think anyone wants to get inside my head with me. It’s too dark and mushy. 🙂

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    1. We’re actually thinking about what to do next. Meg has a new book she’s already editing and a few short children’s fantasy stories I think she should publish as well, but we’ll continue to partner up. I have a couple books started I need to finish as well.

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      1. Oh!!! I removed the users from the front end of the blog so you wouldn’t have to sign in! Damnit I’ll check it out. Try refreshing the browser to see if that helps at all

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  2. Oh no! It’s over? Already?! I really enjoyed this story, and you both did an amazing job! Did you both do research? You know – the kind that David did? Lol with how it ended, there could be another one. Just a thought. 😊 You both have me questioning Anton now…all in the last few lines. I loved this, every chapter! ❤️ You both are really a great team! Hope you guys write another story together soon! 😀

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    1. Thanks, Pink. We both did research, though it’s possible I did more “googling” than Meg. I have been tempted to write a “Behind the Scenes” about us writing this together. It’s been fun and a number of funny things happened while we were in process.

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      1. Googling is so much fun! I do it daily!! 😀 that would be a great post! I’d love to hear about the funny things that happened!

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      1. Good! It was a fun read! 😀 Anytime, Meg! It’s a perfect day to catch up on reading and writing on this rainy day!

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  3. Argh! This IS part one of the series…right? You get us hooked and then up the price? What are you two some kind of “story pushers?” I’m gonna need a fix by next Friday, or something bad might happen! – Kidding! Honestly, this has made Fridays that much more enjoyable! Great job! Thanks to both of you!

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  4. What is next? Cookbook? When does it start? Next weekend?
    I did not see the end coming so I loved it even more. You two are good together…in the writing sense,that is.:-)

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  5. I hate you both. I couldn’t possibly hate my sister but right now I do. He was alive. Anton and Mel could still have had a happy ending together. He was alive! From psychopath to murderer. Bah! She lives Anton too. No way she lives with. She turns herself in, gets Anton arrested becomes a government witness , is sent to protective custody, falls in love with a dashing police officer and marries him. There, that’s a happily ever after.
    I’m not talking to you both. *sulks, shuts both eyes and turns away*
    *opens one eye* B-t-w, when’s the next series coming out? 😛

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    1. Hahahaha! You are awesome and this might be the best comment yet! I know I will write again with Kevin, we had so much fun. After we take a break and get some of our other works in progress back on track, we will think about what to do next. I actually like your suggestion very much…. 😀

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      1. he he he. Thank you 🙂 Well, at least the comments I write are good. Thank god! 😀
        Yay, she’s coming back to you, David (not psychopath David but Meredith’s David) . You’re not orphaned yet. Wait, she is coming. YAY!

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  6. A fitting finale to this saga. Great description of David’s finale as well. This weekly soap opera ran smoothly a reader who wasn’t aware of the collab, wouldn’t have guessed it was a back and forth tennis match. Great work.

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  7. Well written, quite gripping. Poor David sounds like he had it coming to him. Now Mel is in another pickle, does she stay with a killer? Does Anton really have her all to himself? I think not…so many more questions…Oh this can’t be the end… 🙂

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  8. Great idea, you two really do work great together! It felt very seamless, and flowed nicely. What an ending! Ugh, my stomach turned. That’s a good thing in this case! 🙂

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    1. Thank you so much for your encouragement. We’re glad it felt seamless. Meg was a huge help to me, especially with dialogue. I did more of the psychology. And I’m tremendously happy it made your stomach turn. That was our goal – to completely disappoint every reader’s hopes for Mel.

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      1. Ha, well you achieved that for certain! I’d love to give something like this a shot, it’s been fun to follow along. 🙂

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      2. For me, having a partner to “force” me to write fiction on a timetable helped. It also helped in areas I’m weak. I am a better fiction writer now than I was three months ago. I think, in some ways, Meg might say the same. She is a better writer, but maybe she understands the psychology of characters better now. At least narcissists. I’m good at narcissism – I mean, um, writing narcissists.

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      3. Right…good thing you could set her straight on that! I never knew what they were until just recently, but once you know – boy do you get it!
        Glad that the experience brought out new skills in you both, surely a win-win. 🙂


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