What’s ‘that’ all about?

Adventures in editing.

One of the words we writers tend to overuse is the word ‘that’. If you don’t believe me, use your search/find option in your word processor’s editing tool and see how many times you find it in your work. Obviously, it is sometimes appropriate to use ‘that’ in your sentences, but other times it can be eliminated. Here’s an example:

“I think that this gives you a chance to start over,” Vince said.ย 

It’s not grammatically incorrect, but it isn’t necessary, either. Instead, say:

“I think this gives you a chance to start over,” Vince said.

Here’s another example:

He arranged to add his name to the multi-business sign that graced the front lawn at the office building, and bought paint to cover the walls of his new space.

In this instance, ‘that’ should be replaced with ‘which’ (…which graced the front lawn…) but it sounds even better when written like this:

He arranged to add his name to the multi-business sign gracingย the front lawn at the office building, and bought paint to cover the walls of his new space.

When I did a search for ‘that’ in Three Empty Frames, I found 806 of them!!! I’m in the process of finding all those ‘thats’ and eliminating or replacing them.

29 thoughts on “What’s ‘that’ all about?

      1. I’m certain. Not being a trained writer, I simply write how I speak, generally. I’m sure I’d be amazed at how many times I use the words in a paragraph. And poor grammar and punctuation too. ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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      2. Well I like conversational writing! You’d be surprised how many trained writers make glaring errors. I saw a journalist reporting on the hurricane spell the city “Huston” I mean come on!!!

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      3. I hear ya’. Kills me, the number of people on tv who use horrible grammar. And Houston? Dang. How awful. Did you see the Trumpster Fire walk in wearing that stupid fucking White hat he’s hawking? What an asshole. ๐Ÿ˜

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      1. Great idea. It drives me crazy when I see the wrong use of hear/here, and of course their/they’re/there and two/to/too – – then I find myself doing it too. Being human; it stinks sometimes, doesn’t it?! ๐Ÿ˜‰

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      1. I guess maybe I do. I’m not sure… I probably say it so often I don’t even realize I’m doing it. Oh… look at that! ‘Even’ — that’s another one I overuse. It pretty much never needs to be there…

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