Adventures in editing.
As I begin editing Breaking Bread, I can’t help but think about how I fumbled through the process with Book One: Three Empty Frames. As a first time, unpublished author, I didn’t feel I had the luxury of hiring a professional editor. Professional editing can get expensive. Depending on the length of your document and the level of editing you choose, it can cost several hundred to several thousand dollars. And though I knew an editor could take a good manuscript and make it great, I just couldn’t bring myself to do it.
Nevertheless, I wasn’t so naive as to think I could do this alone. I had to get objective feedback before I published the book. Sure I loved the story, the couple of friends I let read it were enthusiastic about it too. But kind words from a few people close to me were not going to be enough. I needed beta readers: non-professional readers who will carefully read your manuscript with an eye to finding plot holes, disruptions in continuity, grammar and spelling mistakes and possibly highlighting aspects of the story that might be unbelievable.
When choosing beta readers, make sure they aren’t just going to tell you what you want to hear because they don’t want to hurt your feelings. You NEED constructive criticism. That’s why your mom and dad, husband or wife, or beloved aunt are not the best choices. So what now? Are you in a book club? Ask your group to beta read for you. How about an online writer’s group? Other writers are usually willing to help you out. Ask your blogging friends here on WordPress to read for you. Just be sure to choose people who will give you an honest opinion and some thoughtful feedback. Make sure to attach a copyright warning to anything you send out, too.
And for heaven’s sake don’t be thin skinned! Take the feedback and learn from it.
At the time I had completed Three Empty Frames, I belonged to a book club and asked some of the other members to read for me. Even though the group has since broken up, I can still count on the same folks to read my unpublished work. I also recruited my friend Brett, who is an English teacher to read it. I know I said don’t ask your friends, however, I know the teacher in him won’t let me put a foot wrong. If you have kids in school, perhaps you could approach their English teachers for help. But maybe wait until summer…
These days, I do use a professional editor. Formerly of Simon and Schuster in New York, my editor Kevin (now good friend) quit the rat race and works for himself. Often, he comes over with his wife and baby and hangs out with me in the pool. I ply him with beer and pick his brain. I have him cleaning up my first two books, the ones I published without professional help. Why do that? Because when I publish Breaking Bread, one of the older books might be part of a deal to market the new novel. I want it to be the best it can possibly be. The point in telling you all of this is that in handing Kevin my older work, his feedback assured me that I and my beta team had done a good job. The manuscript was ‘very clean’ in his words.
So for you first time writers, if you are meticulous with your process, AND if you find people with sharp eyes to spot your mistakes, give you good insights, and offer constructive criticism, you may be able to forgo the services of a professional editor.
Well… that’s great to hear… Not that I have anything worthy of publishing… but I most definitely couldn’t bring myself to spend the $ to hire a professional anything. 😀
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That’s exactly how I felt. Your writing is nice and ‘clean’ too. You could do without the professional, I’m sure of it!
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It’s not all ‘clean’. 😀 Sorry… that joke had to be made.
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I was waiting for it!!! Lol!
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I knew you were! 😀
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Great advice, Meg, and nicely written. I’ll add it to my Wednesday Workshop series. I was amazed at the number of errors I mad in my earlier Indies. I am getting better at it now, but he occasional typo still slips though.
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Thanks, Roger! I reread 3 EF so many times I could recite parts of it… and I was sick of it! But at least there aren’t too many errors in it for a first time novel.
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Your work is pretty clean. I did a great deal of editing as an academic, but there was always some little silver fish that slipped out of my grasp, a comma here, a mis-spelling here. Some were quite
amusing, except that academia can be such a serious place!
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Oh I have no doubt! The hardest errors to catch are homonyms. Especially the ever so subtle its/it’s. Your eye passes over these as you read.
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Reblogged this on rogermoorepoetdotcom and commented:
Wednesday Workshop: It’s a pleasure to re-blog this post from Meg Sorick on Beta Readers and the Art of Editing.
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Thank you Roger!
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Wonderfully educational for striving writers Meg. So very appreciated!
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Thank you Holly!
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a pleasure always.
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Yes, I like this post, Meg. I worked at a law firm and a court reporting firm typing from audio and even though I know the difference, an occasional core rather than corps would slip through cause when you’re on autopilot you don’t always see/hear those things!
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Those are the hardest mistakes to catch. Fortunately with ‘find’ and ‘replace’ in word processors, you can isolate the troublemakers and look for them!
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Absolutely. All great advice!
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Great Advice Lady Meg! ❤
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Thank you Sir Eric!
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That’s something that I actually want to work on this summer. Besides trying to be more regular with my blog (at least 3-4 times a week). Finding literary clubs is on my radar.
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I belong to the Insecure Writers Support group on Facebook. That has always been a great place to get feedback. I admit I’ve kind of abandoned them as of late, but only from sheer lack of time! Best of luck to you!
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Aren’t all writers insecure? I thought it was a prerequisite!
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I’m sure you’re right! 😜
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I admire how prolific your writing and blogging is. It’s very cool.
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Thanks so much, Vinnie!
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Simply put, you rock.
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That is awesome! I’m so glad you think so!
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I love all the support you’ve given me.
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It’s my pleasure!
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And I hope that the images on my other site didn’t weird you out.
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No, don’t worry, Vin!
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Happy to know they didn’t make you uneasy.
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Not at all! 🙂
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Phew, I’m relieved.
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😀
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