Old men who have foolish ideas and no self control
Old women who play the victim and sulk
Middle aged men who want to walk away
Middle aged women who live vicariously through their children
Brave young men who try to pick up the torch
Brave young women who fight for their rights
Children who have no idea what they’re in for
Babies who are innocently self absorbed
And last: the caretaker who overcharges for his services
All of them get on a speeding train
The tracks abruptly end six miles ahead
But the engineer jumps at the last minute
Preserving his life alone
The crowd observing this catastrophe
Congratulates him on a job well done
And he’s given the key to the city
Drinks on the house
As everyone turns their backs on the smoking ruin
This poem, if you want to call it that, is as close as I’ve ever come to automatic writing. You dear reader are welcome to interpret it any way you like.
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I just needed to share this poem by Meg Sorick!
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Thank you so much.
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You’re welcome 😉 Being an engineer’s girlfriend I just needed to share it 😀 😉 If you don’t mind, I will follow you too!
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Ah, yes! Thank you. I’ll be over to visit you as well!
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Reminds me our elected officials….or PayPalCal. Haven’t determined which yet. 😃
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Good one. This is my brain on late night mode (and maybe a drink too many🙃)
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Ain’t nothin’ wrong with that. 😃😃
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Cheers!
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😃🍻
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Oh Meg! Put that pen in automatic frequently my friend. I feel it rumbling down the track.
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Haha! Awesome, thank you!
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I agree, this is wonderful!
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Thanks Angela!
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My pleasure!
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Crazy train for sure! Fantastic, Meg!
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Thank you Rob!
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Automatic writing… you are in good company… Blake, Yeats, the Surrealists… a great absurdist quality to this… even Bunuel like in the way his cowardice is rewarded. Excellently done, I will be back shortly to read part 6.
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Thank you, Cake. I was nervous posting this, but now I am reassured. 😅
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Automatic writing well you know that you would get my vote.
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I do know that! Thank you again
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My pleasure
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Ohh I like it! That’s pretty cool!
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Thanks, Vic! A little weird maybe, but it just rolled out. 😜
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That’s the cool part! 😀
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I’m so glad you like it!
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Out of this world, as automatic writing should be! I see that people claim to be able to teach how to “do” automatic writing. Codswallop, or balderdash! Choose your own word. I used to try automatic writing with a couple of friends, where we would each pose a question and write whatever came from that. Thanks for rekindling the memory.
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Thank you Peter. Teach it? Really? That sort of defeats the purpose if you ask me! Glad you enjoyed!
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I was glad it didn’t include the other train speeding toward it and at what point the trains passed each other… 😉
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Just in the nick of time!
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Wow. Very cool. Automatic writing, I will have to give it a twirl.
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Thanks Wendy!
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I really thought this was going to be a word problem. I had my pencil all ready…
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Ahahaha!!! Now that you mention it… 😂
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Very interesting and doubly interesting where the mind takes us when we turn off the controls and just let it roll. Like your train, in fact: jump, engineer, jump!
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I’ve figured out where part of this came from. The Amtrak engineer responsible for a terrible crash in Philadelphia last year, was charged with manslaughter – that was in the news this week. The rest of it? No idea!
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Interesting how the unconscious mind flitters like a moth from idea to idea. Just watch out for those candles, though!
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And somehow makes connections where none would seem obvious!
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This is the key to surrealism … it is the connection of the dream world to the real one, always tenuous and often very mysterious. Yet it has meaning.
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Right! The key to a door that leads to an endless hallway of doors. I wish I knew more about the symbolism of dreams. Although I am a little skeptical that the images have the same meaning for different people. What could signify comfort for one could be a nightmare for another. Just my opinion…
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You have summarized the basic difference between Freud (same or similar meaning) and Jung (individual to each of us). Carl Jung is well worth reading as a guide to individual creativity and the meaning of symbols.
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Well, I haven’t tackled psychology since my second year of college so… might be time for a refresher! Thanks, Roger!
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Excellent…. The engineer is a dark character… I am thinking of many historic leaders from the Past… Particularly in the context of the Second World War…. Thank you for sharing this one (and for connecting!)… Have a nice week! 😀
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Thank you so much! What an intriguing take on the piece. I believe you are onto something. The engineering of atrocity… I’m happy to connect! And wish you a good week as well!
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Wow! Not sure if your interpretation but I did have a vision…more of a recurrent passing feeling I get from time to time before dismissing the notion. “Burn them all!!” Well done Meg; this one makes ya think!
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Thanks, Matt. I let this one spill out so I’m not sure where it came from either. Now I view it this way: I think there is a perversity in being fascinated by bad news. The being appalled but not being able to look away, maybe…
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I can see it that way. I kind of saw it as someone who was tired of trying to help a lost cause and one day decided to just let it end.
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I like that interpretation. That’s exactly what you have to do sometimes!
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