No longer an ocean between us
Only a turbulent sea
My light infiltrates your darkness
But it’s still too murky to see
No forest or mountains oppose us
Nor rivers that run to the sea
Your light penetrates my darkness
Not quite enough to see
With the water beckoning to us
Who’s the first to dip into the sea?
Your darkness my lightness coalesce
And it’s all that we need to see
Meg Sorick, Author/Artist 
Lovely.
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Thank you!
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I don’t think my mind is right today…
The only thing I noticed was darkness being penetrated.
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Hahahaha! Naughty! 😉
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Truly…
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😃😃😃
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Dark, moody and sensual. A wonderful combination.
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Thank you Rob!
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Mmm, what Rob said!
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🙏 thank you!
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Brava, Meg! This is outstanding! ❤
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So glad you like it! Thank you!
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I like this! Dark and light coming together- it’s like the warm glow of candlelight.
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Oh I like that idea, thanks Vic!
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Are you home?
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Just! Hanging at the airport waiting for our ride. 😜
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Ooh. I hope you had a great time and jet lag doesn’t get you for long!
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I am soooooo tired!!! We squeezed in so much stuff! But it was great!
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Sounds awesome!!
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I’ll catch up with you later this week! 😘
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Great! 😘
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Love this, Doc
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Thanks Rita!
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I really like the progression of the poem, a valued acknowledging of what each person brings to the relationship.
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Thank you August. That’s it exactly. A fine melding of two souls!
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Great poem Doctor, romantic, pensive and sensual…plus a pun in the title!
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Thank you, very glad you like it. Haven’t waxed poetic in a while. Then I saw Shelley’s handwriting and I went into a fugue state…,
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Oh that is excellent, I like fugue and trance states. It is beautiful…
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I can be swept away on a wave of awe and enthusiasm sometimes
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Awe and enthusiasm… so do I on occasion
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It’s a marvelous thing
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This is really nice, Meg! I’m sure your own sketch of the sea would have been great too! 🙂 very talented, keep up the awesome writing and sketching! 😊
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Thanks, Pink! The photo is my own at least!
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Beautiful, Meg! 😊
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So vivid and real.
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Thanks, Vinnie! I’ve missed you – I’ve been traveling and haven’t had the chance to keep up with reading and commenting. 🙂
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You’ve been missed too Meg.
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I’ll be over today to catch up. xo
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Thanks. Watched some good stuff recently and wrote some very naughty posts.
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Lovely, Meg.
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Thanks, Angela!
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My pleasure.
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Superb!
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Thank you!
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