The Diary of a Writer – Meg Sorick
In the course of novel writing, there are points at which absolutely nothing of consequence is going on. That is life, is it not? When you reach one of those points in the overall plot, you do not need to record every little insignificant detail of your characters’ lives while time moves forward and the next major event occurs.
For example, in Breaking Bread, the investigation into the fire by the police, the fire department and the coroner all take some time to complete. Maya and Brad, their families and friends will be waiting around for the results of tests and the complication of clues, checks from insurance companies and so forth. I don’t need to report all of this minutiae as it happens. Instead I will scoot time ahead and as I do, summarize or infer all the things that have happened to our fictional friends along the way. You will see me doing this in the following excerpt. I have even summarized an event that I could have dragged out but chose not to for the sake of keeping to the main story. You will see what I mean.
The time traveling needs to transition smoothly, however, so the reader doesn’t feel like the story came to a screeching halt and then raced forward again. Thus, the bridging piece needs to be just the right length with the just the right amount of information included. I dithered over this next excerpt for that very reason. (Thus the delay.) I wrote and deleted, wrote and deleted scene after scene. Do I take Brad shopping for new clothes? Do I write about him figuring out where to live? Do I show Leo and Olivia moving into their new house so that Brad can have Leo’s apartment? What is Maya going to do for work? We need to know those things but they aren’t crucial to the plot. I left them out.
What about Maya having conversations with her parents and Michael to piece together what Tanya was up to? That is crucial to the plot but I decided they weren’t ready for it yet. My conclusion was to proceed ahead, adding in a detail as it needs to be explained. For example, a single sentence can let the reader know that Brad has moved into Leo’s apartment. We can assume he shopped for new clothes –he has no choice– but you don’t need to hear what he bought.
Other details can be revealed in passing or within conversation. For example, Maya and Brad can have a discussion/argument over him buying a new building and she tells him she’s going to ask for her old job back at the Philadelphia hotel. A lot of information gets revealed in a short amount of time.
And so… we time travel forward a couple of weeks to the funeral.
Header Image: The Time Machine film 1960 starring Rod Taylor and based on the story by HG Wells.
This is why I could never be a writer…aside not having the necessary mastery of the English language. I’d get so lost in the details and forget where one plot leads into another, how characters relate to said plot, etc. It’d be a jumbled mess if I were penning a story. 😜
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I have charts and spreadsheets and post it notes all over the place or I’d have a mess on my hands too! Actually it is quite a mess literally!
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I believe it! Dastardly post-it notes!!! They wouldn’t help me in the least. 😃
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I’m addicted to post it notes. And reading glasses! I have both of those things in multiples and scattered in every room of the house!
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OMG! My head would explode! My problem is I stick ’em to shit then either lose said shit or forget where the aforementioned shit was placed in the first place. 😃
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Lol! It’s funny, I pride myself on being ‘tech savvy’ and yet there are some old school habits I just can’t break! I’ll have to do a post on post it notes one day! 😃
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Hahaha! Say that 3 times fast! 😃
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Press the button Meg. Nooooooooooo, not that one!!
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Hahahaha! Not that kind of time traveling… but sometimes I wish!
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I’m in need of a little novel time travelling myself. Thanks for putting this out there.
I know where I need to get there, but need to think about how. Time-travel machine? Check.
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Thanks Mark, I can get bogged down in giving a play by play description and none of it really moves the story forward! Glad you enjoyed.
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I go back and forth, write and delete… write and delete. Sometimes I latch onto a detail that I just want to write because somehow, I love the way I wrote it… so it sucks when I realize it really doesn’t need to be there. I hate that… but if I’m the only one who wants to read that part, well, I guess it’s just for me. I do the same thing with endings. I hate to end things… so after I do it, sometimes, I keep writing anyway… just for me. (I know… I’m crazy.)
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Not crazy at all! However, Joss Whedon, writer of screenplays says sometimes you have to rip out your favorite scene if it doesn’t fit. But it doesn’t mean you can’t save it for another place or another story even1! And hell we’re all really writing for ourselves! 😃🙋
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True. And Joss Whedon is a genius. ☺
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He is!!! 😃
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The devil really is in the details…
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It is! Or they can sink your ship if you overload it!
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So true. Sometimes I get paralyzed over too much, too little, I’m making it boring….
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I can do that too. Feel like I have to describe every moment of every day… For continuity’s sake but there’s too much routine stuff that doens’t help move the story along!
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Very interesting piece, Meg. How much do we tell? How much do we hide? Excellent
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Yes, and weeding out the detritus to keep the narrative clean and concise but at the same time evocative. 🙂
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This is amazingly helpful. Great advice
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Thank you, Jane. I’m glad it was!
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Good stuff to keep in mind! We need to think about our sci fi story. I forgot about it.
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Yes, I want to work on it, too!
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Excellent advise about those difficult and awkward transitions periods. I must remember your advise when I get back to writing.
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Thank you. Are you stuck on the story or just finding time?
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Time I think. I really need to be like those monkeys in a locked room with typewriters and an infinity of time.
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Time – yes. Ever think about living somewhere else in the world? Where its not so expensive? Of course I’m always scheming to fake my death and run off to start over! So I’m always looking for some way to do it. Like teach English over the internet to non-native speakers… while living in Prague or somewhere.
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All the time, a desert island would be ideal.
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What?!? No rain?😉
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A tropical desert island with frequent downpours
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That’s better. Robinson Crusoe…. like I haven’t bestowed you with enough nicknames already.
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I like nicknames… I want a thousand aliases
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I count eight names that I’ve called you. My favorites are Night Manager and my new one for you: Felix Rex.
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I like them too, keep them coming.
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