Apropos of National Novel Writing Month, I thought I’d repost this favorite of mine.
Why do I write in the light
When the dark is so intoxicating?
Just to keep up appearances…
Do I continue to smile though I’m dying?
How do I find my voice
Amidst a cacophony of screaming?
I don’t want your self-help diatribe
I don’t want your power of positive thinking
I can’t hear myself think
Let alone pen a work of distinction
I need a strong, stiff drink
But that’s only self-medication
And what’s it all mean anyway?
When nothing’s going to give satisfaction
Just a book full of ink spots
That sits on a shelf gathering desolation
How do I come to grips
With my own profound unhappiness?
I’m nothing but thunderstorms and anger
Keep your sunshine and sweetness
I have no more words of encouragement
It’s cruelty, competition, unfairness
The theme for the day is belligerent
It’s outworking displays its aggressiveness
So save your kindly comments
And your gestures of reverent concern
For into the fires of failure
I let the manuscripts burn
Lick the curling hundreds of pages
Kindle the books, at each turn
Throw gas on the conflagration
And I’m gone, never more to return…
Have you ever read “The Power of Positive Thinking” by Peale? I think it could really brighten you up.
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I just added audio… Tell me what you think.
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I’ve talked to you dozens of times and never realized what a good voice you have for narration. I like it! I also noticed you managed to work in “kindle”…but maybe I should save you my kindly comment?
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Ha! Thank you. I’m actually feeling quite positive and energized today. Go figure…
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I am not. Today was long and not long enough. It will be better tomorrow. Kinda wish I was curling up with what’s-her-name.
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I made huge progress today, felt good. Make it so captain…
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Not until Fri. I have work to do and miles to go before I sleep. Hey, I could write a poem and include that line.
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Yeah… you do that…
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I think it’s kinda catchy…
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Yeah, wow, Meg, talk about your dark side! I was almost afraid to comment 🙂
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I’m rubbing off on her…
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Just great. I was hoping she’d rub off on you!
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Not bloody likely…
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Well, not with that attitude…
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It’s the only attitude I know, Diane. You of all people should know this by now.
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And you should know by now that I always hope for the best! I’m just a freaking ray of sunshine 🙂
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You have been my sunshine my whole life, Sis. Even when Mom locked you in the cellar with the spiders. I was the one who came and brought you grilled cheese that I smashed flat and slipped under the door.
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Omg, repressed memories…Waco out of town again? Too much time on your hands?
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The weirdest thing just happened! So I’m replying to another comment and yours (this one) that I can see right above it, suddenly disappears and goes to spam! And then the one I’m commenting on does the same thing! What the hell?!? Have you been getting sent to spam like a while back?
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Yes, and I filled out 2 forms with Akismet and they say they don’t see a problem. But people I’ve followed for awhile have been telling me I’m in their spam lately! And I hate Spam. Maybe I’ll do a post tomorrow and ask people to check…
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I’ve starting checking every other day or so, just in case. I feel really bad not responding to someone’s comment. 😦
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I didn’t even know to do that at first, but now I do, too. If I comment and someone doesn’t respond, I assume I’m back in spam!
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I added an audio track… Too much?
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No, cool, very Edgar Allan Poe…
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Oooooh! Awesome, thank you!
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🙂
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Holy crap! What a brilliant diatribe!
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Thank you. Thank you!
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I’m familiar with that feeling! You expressed it with such a rawness and fierceness! Well done.
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Thanks, Kay!
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First off – do NOT listen to to Kevin! He is clearly corrupting you, very slowly. This is wonderful, with excellent narration, I am so excited! Bring on the Dark Side!! We have the best cookies, they’re just not in Gatlinburg…;)
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Thank you! Oh, I don’t really need Kevin to corrupt me. I do just fine by myself. Ha! And yes, I think the Dark Side not only has the best bakers, but by far the best costumers too. Black, anyone? 😀
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Agreed on all counts. I love black! 🙂
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Everyone should always listen to me and make me the center of their attention. It’s actually in WordPress’ Terms and Conditions which I’ll wager you have not read.
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Evidently I need to get out my binocular loupe to confirm this….
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I’m in most Terms of Service.
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Love the narration! Gives the already kick-ass piece some additional punch! No kindly comments here, nope. No sunshine either! 😈
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Thanks, Mari! You know what I’m saying?!? 😉
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Uh huh! I’m pretty sure I do! 😉
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I’m sure it goes without saying that some of that is right out of my brain. (Not that you went there to find it… that would be pretty gross…) But anyway… the emotion.
“I don’t want your self-help diatribe
I don’t want your power of positive thinking”
“Keep your sunshine and sweetness”
Yes.
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Yeah, a mini rant there… Feeling snarky! And I knew you’d like those few lines! 😉
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Yeah, I’m feeling… uh… something. I don’t think it has a name. Unless I can figure out how to combine about 7 emotions into one big fat word!
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Let it rip! You ever see how the Germans and Scandinavians stick a whole bunch of words together to form another? So do that! Angrafrustifaloveyhornostaloregretasarcastoppable. Or something. 🙃
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Damn… I will never be able to spell that again! I’ll just keep riding this roller coaster ’til I puke. Turn away!
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😁😁😁
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Well, that was killer. 😃
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Better than me singing Janis Joplin, though right?!? LOL!
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Child, please! Nothing could ever top that!!! 😃
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LMAO!!!!!!
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*lifts up a cardboard box he’s hiding under*….but this is really really awesome!…*goes back to hiding*
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Hahaha! Don’t hide Eric! And thank you, so, so much!
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😁 you’re welcome, Meg. 💕
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😍
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Wooowwww! And hearing you is fabulous.
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Thank you soooooo much! 😃
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Amazing poem. Good thing you didn’t burn your computer/tablet etc.
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Thank you! Yes that would be costly! 😜
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Phew! Love this and your audio! Fire away 🙂 (hope that wasn’t too sunshiny sweet!) Also these lines stood out to me…the visuals here (in the whole thing) are vivid:
“Just a book full of ink spots
That sits on a shelf gathering desolation”
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Thanks, Em! Appreciate it! The frustration and insecurity that sometimes swamp you when your work is in its final stage …. 😬
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I read the poem from my WP app and was about to comment, that’s when I read the comment about you adding audio, so I opened the post on my browser to listen. My, do you have a good voice for an audio book or what!?!
I really enjoyed the aggression in this poem, this was exactly how I was feeling yesterday.
That line “I am nothing but thunderstorms and anger” that sums it up for me. 👍
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Thanks, Rashmi! I sometimes get weary of being upbeat and positive. I blurt out something like this and poof! I feel better!
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I’ll try not to write a kindly comment, but I might be guilty of it. I do hope you’re feeling better than the state you were in when you wrote this poem. I’ve had times of crushing doubt, and I wonder if that’s typical of people who try to use their creativity to form something new (rather than criticize someone else’s work). I’ve found it’s helpful to remember the joy that writing can give to me. Not every time I write, but it’s there. And I can’t control if other people think my writing is trash or my books are nothing special. I try to focus on what makes me happy, and that helps me with the anxiety.
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Thank you for this. This kind of thing hits me when I’m about to publish. I have a book coming out soon and all the doubts and insecurities that I have sometimes crash down on me. I just have to not let it paralyze me into inaction. I’ve been dithering with the blurb and cover for way too long… And the book is good! At least I think so! Agh! Right? Really, thank you for weighing in. Only another writer knows how this feels…
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You’re very welcome. Know that you are not at all the only one with doubts. I’ve read established authors also get them, and I bet it’s pretty common. Congrats on the book coming out soon! Finishing a book is a victory by itself.
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SO GOOD!
I love that you added audio. It’s good for the remedial poetry types such as myself. 😉
The tone was so much clearer than the one that would have played in my head just reading it.
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Thank you! Yes, I wanted “the feel” of the poem to come through.
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I love the audio for this poem, Meg! You sound fantastic and it adds to the poem as you read 🙂 I would love to try something like that for one or all of my poems. Unfortunately, I have a strong accent from my home province of Newfoundland, Canada, so it would never work. I’d end up sounding ridiculous. Ah well! Love the poem too btw 🙂
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I’m sure you wouldn’t sound ridiculous. Regional accents are so interesting. Go for it! 😃
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Yes they are 🙂 Perhaps I will someday 🙂 Although I’ve heard my voice on the answering machine, and I’m not sure it’s a poetry friendly voice haha 🙂 I’m fine with that 🙂 Happy Friday!
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Thanks, Brenda! You too!
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Great to hear your voice and read along with the text. It adds so much more meaning. I have been listening to T. S. Eliot reading his own poetry while driving: the reader’s own voice makes the poetry stand out in such a different way. Thank you for this. Roger.
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Thank you, Roger! Much appreciated! I wanted to read it so the emotions were unmistakeable.
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Yes: that was precisely what came over. My reading would have been different: a different rhythm and more anger in places.
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Of course. Uniquely interpreted – that’s the beauty of poetry!
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Awesome!! Full of fire! I was just talking to another blogger (Mark Ryan) yesterday about what he called, “pissed off poetry.” I think we’ve all done it. Those times when writing in anger/frustration makes things so much better.
Can’t wait to listen but can’t right now. 🙂
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Wow! Thanks, Vic! Appreciate it!
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