“But while I advise you to embellish, I forbid you to depart from what is plausible. The reader has every right to feel aggrieved when he realizes that too much is being asked of him. He feels that the author is trying to deceive him, his pride suffers and he simply stops believing the moment he suspects he is being misled.” An Essay On Novels – The Marquis de Sade
Isn’t that great advice? Whether you write by the seat of your pants (pantser) or you meticulously plot out your story (plotter), you eventually will come to a point where you write yourself into a corner or your plot hits a wall. You have a couple options: scrap it and start over from the point you got yourself into that mess, or write yourself out of it. If you choose the latter, the challenge is writing a solution without taking the shortcut of using coincidences to bail yourself out. I read this advice from Emma Coates –one of Pixar’s story artists– years ago, and I never forgot it: “coincidences to get your characters into trouble are great; coincidences to get them out of it is cheating.” Not only that, like the Marquis said, it asks too much of the reader.
Nevertheless, good storytelling depends on the element of surprise. No one wants to have the ending figured out in chapter three. The writer’s approach may be to: 1) slowly reveal clues that gradually build to a logical conclusion, or 2) misdirect us with spurious information, or 3) obfuscate the story so that at the climax, the truth is dropped like a bomb on the reader. The trick is to reveal the truth -as shocking as it may be- in a way that the reader think to himself, “of course!” because finally it all makes sense. The worst thing in the world is to leave the reader scratching his head at the end, wondering how the hell he got from there to here in 100,000 words, and regretting buying it on Amazon.
Header image via the poisoned pencil, David Tenant image via Pinterest.
This is great advice and when you make posts like this, I save them all. They’re in my “writing help” folder. Oh, also, being such a math nerd, I love your coincidence picture…
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Wow, cool! I’m glad this is helpful! I loved that pic, too. I’ve a couple more tips from the notorious Marquis to share. Coming in the next couple weeks!
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Well, God knows I need all the help I can get… you know I get stuck… (in writing, I mean… though I get stuck in every other way, too…)
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We all get stuck. I kept writing myself into corners throughout the Mysterious Arboretum – the science had to be believable even to a kid!
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I always think what I write is too predictable… And it probably is… but I don’t want it to feel or sound forced either…
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A good story can be a little predictable. Certain events should unfold naturally. It needs to be believable. The devil is in the details. Making the ordinary interesting. Like the nasty mother in law tarnishing the perfect love story. Everything should have a few dents!
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I see what you did there…
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Hehehehe! 😉
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I remember reading tom Wolfe’s a man in full (awful novel don’t bother) which was set mainly in Atlanta apart from a character who was in prison in California which was convenient as when he had a showdown with the badasses and things looked bad for our man a earthquake happened destroying the prison and yet our man was able to escape unharmed. Ludicrous. I throw the damned thing at the wall. Good advise must remember to follow it and I like the quote from the Divine Marquis. I am picturing him now as the worlds most dubious creative writing teacher.
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Ahaha! I threw that book at the wall, too! Never finished it. This is tremendous advice – I have highlighted a few more of his pearls of wisdom to share in future posts. I imagine class with the Marquis would rapidly deteriorate….
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Yes, he would be going on about the body being a text and eyeing the attractive students and then an inappropriate suggestion would just spill from his lips
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And when called on it, having an eloquent and rational-sounding argument to justify his behaviors.
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Yes… one of his characters remarked that when he had an erection he wanted the universe to come to a stop. De Sade re-arranged the work to justify his combustible nature.
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The ultimate narcissist but a fascinating figure
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Very fascinating, I will recommend more by and on De Sade in a while
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Thank you
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Wonderful advice, Meg! Thank you so much.💜
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You’re welcome Kay. Have a wonderful day, lovely!
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You, too, my friend!
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Coincidentally… more coincidences! I almost used that Pi image for my post yesterday about coincidences but went with the synchronicity quote instead.
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Ahahaha! That’s awesome!
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(i like Sandra’s idea of the ‘Writing Help’ notebook. i should probably take all my taped up and stick-tacked printouts off my walls, ceiling, windows and door and put them in sleeves in a notebook.
…but then, there goes all my wall insulation. hmm.)
Wonderful observations and advice, Meg…definitely an addition to my walls!
I’m enjoying all the comments on Roger’s site…they’re so edifying! And thank you for visiting and following The Old FOssil!
Pearl 🙂
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Thank you, Pearl! Personally I’m a post it note addict, too. My desktop monitor is overloaded with them. I think I’d forget about everything if I filed it all away. I need to have it right in front of me! 😀 And I just adore Roger!
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Hahahahahaha!!! Okay…look at my mini-post that I’m putting up right now…JUST FOR YOU!!! 😀 😀 😀
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Holy mackerel! I bow to the queen!
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(genuflection is generally accepted currency here 😀 😀 😀 )
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As you wish, your majesty!
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😀 😀 😀 😀 (feels sides splitting 😀 )
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😃
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hee hee – love the pi/pie 😀
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Very clever! 🙂
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Pantster. That is a new one for me, but so descriptive. I would be a pantster, sub plotter. I write, then I go back and try to make the story make sense.
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So a little of both. Hey, whatever works!
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Great advice, like when you write these! Thanks, Meg
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Thanks, Diane. I have a couple more little gems from the marquis to share. His writing advice is timeless, despite his terrible reputation.
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Meg, a great quote followed by some great writing tips. Thank you!
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Glad you liked it. Thank you!
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You’re welcome.
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I really loved the quote and your advice. Sharing this on my Daisy in the Willows FB page.
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Fabulous! Thanks, Daisy!
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This is excellent advice, I was stuck for a long time in my novel trying to figure out a way to reveal the mystery without the coincidence aspect. Being a plotter it took me a very long time! 😀
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Thank you! Believe I’ve learned from writing myself into more than one corner!
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That’s why they say practice makes perfect! 😀
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Yes, ma’am!
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