Dripping leaves, black sky
Electricity crackles
Violence sublime
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Meg Sorick, Author/Artist 
It’s a nice haiku but the last line is slightly redundant as sublime can mean something that is violent, maybe: electric sublime
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It’s a nice haiku but the last line is kinda redundant as sublime can mean something beautifully violent, maybe try: electric sublime
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But then electricity is part of the previous line….
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Love storms. 😃
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Me, too! Especially at the shore! 😃
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Oh man, those are the best! And the surf is always fantastic before they roll in! 😃
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I love it! Storm last night? We had super bright lightning and really loud thunder here… and a giant downpour. It was awesome. And it lasted about 15 minutes… My son said it looked like someone was holding a floodlight outside his window… hahaha!
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Ooooh, yeah I love storms, too! Super busy weekend! Not getting a lot of “screen” time…. 😕
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Aww… well, that’s not really a bad thing. I regularly get far too much… 🙂
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Good haiku
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