Have you ever wondered how it all began?
Fictional Kevin and Dr. Meg
FK: Several months ago I had been bantering about with several new WordPress friends: Dr. Meg, Dr. Shell and Jason. In my typical snarky fashion, I touted my superiority, made fun of their posts and was generally a nuisance.
They all loved me (of course.)
Jason made a serious post about how he was NOT accepting guest posts on his blog. I, of course, took that as a challenge. I decided to write a short story featuring him and my new blogger friends. It was compelling, so he decided to repost it on his blog. Win for the Fictional Boy.
If you read The Post it is, like most of my fiction, concerned with death and gore. Dr. Meg read it and made some comments. The online love was obvious…
M: I had a new follower… Fictional Kevin. His first comments had been on my post about Elmore Leonard’s ten rules of writing. “Seems like a pretty funny guy,” I thought. Ok, I’ll follow back.
I visited and commented on his blog a couple of times and then this happened…
On a post about sending himself text messages to remember ideas while he’s out and about, here is our exchange:
Meg: Funny!!!! I use notes on my phone too. How is that harder than sending yourself a text, Kevin? Are YOU sober?
Kevin: Don’t mess with my mojo this morning, Meg. I will cut a bitch. And I am mostly sober. Well, sort of. Remember: Hemingway said “write drunk, edit sober.” So I’m just like Hemingway. He was an American writer.
Meg: Fine, ‘Ernest’ I will leave you to your scribbling! *Stomping out the virtual door in a huff* “Bitch indeed,” she muttered.
Kevin: Shouts after her: “and put on something nice for once, geez!”
Meg: Sniff
The came The Post. Seriously, go read it and ask me why the hell I stuck around. I can’t explain it myself. I barely knew this guy and he slaughtered me (in the story) in a most gruesome way after insulting me, my blog and my writing. For some reason I didn’t run screaming, I responded:
There he was, on the park bench, waiting for her. It was strange that he’d suggested they meet in the park on such a dreary day. She hadn’t given it much thought. She was too excited to see him. After all Kevin was one of her few writer friends. He of all people would be happy that her book had made the best seller list. As she approached, he looked up at her smiling.
“Hey,” she said, returning the smile.
He rose and offered her the spot where he’d been sitting since it was dry. Instead of sitting beside her, he picked something up from the ground and stood to face her.
“You smug bitch,” he muttered, before landing the first blow.
The first one didn’t kill her, neither did the second. Through the physical pain, her heart was breaking. She thought he’d understand. She thought he’d be happy for her. She thought he was her friend.
Kevin’s response? “This is perfect.”
It apparently was the beginning of a beautiful relationship…
FK: Dr. Meg responded almost positively to her untimely demise in “The Post”. I didn’t find out until later even her hubby, Harry, was concerned.
We continued to banter back and forth on our blogs and eventually she was able to see past my rugged good looks and charm to the real me.
For some years I had considered writing fiction. I make my living writing non-fiction, but I wanted to expand my horizons. Writing fiction is far different than writing non.
Reading Meg’s blog, I realized she is far more competent at fiction than I, so I paid close attention to the things she was writing, trying to learn. It helped. I wrote a couple short stories and also wrote more on a couple longer-term pieces I was working on.
After we got to know one another we exchanged emails.
I began to realize I needed help to be able to write fiction well. I struggled to write dialog and deadlines were an issue – with fiction, I had none. After getting comfortable with Meg and with her writing style, I proposed a limited collaboration. A mid-length story, 14 chapters around 1,000 words each, written alternately as a serial with each chapter appearing on our blogs weekly.
Foolishly, she fell into my trap.
M: Kevin thinks he’s so smart, doesn’t he? Well, he is, actually. And I immediately recognized what a great opportunity and challenge this would be for me. It would push me to write out of my comfort zone. Even though it was not without some misgivings, I left the basic idea for the story up to him, since he had suggested this whole escapade. I even let him write the first chapter, knowing that would give me the final word. And thus, more control over the story.*evil laugh*
You see, originally we thought we’d keep our alternating chapters secret from one another so that we’d have to “respond” to one another’s writing. But as the story progressed we realized that a true collaboration was going to have to happen if this tale was going to be any good. And THAT’S when I foolishly fell into his trap!
FK: Writing the first chapter was easy for me, but it lacked “something.” I am good at identifying the psychological makeup and backstory for characters. I had that down cold. I can even write a compelling bit of narrative if I work hard and hold my mouth just right.
When I got done, there was something missing. That first chapter was all “tell” and no “show.”
I sent it to Meg for her input. She agreed. She helped me craft some dialog that showed David “being” David, rather than simply me telling the reader about him. It improved the chapter dramatically (pun intended.)
This is one of the best reasons to get a writing partner: He/she can fill in the gaps in your own ability.
M: I have the same habits as Kevin in creating backstory for my characters. Write a little biography on them, things that won’t necessarily be included in the narrative, but information that helps you shape their behavior. Up to this point though, I hadn’t written a character into a situation as dangerous and psychologically manipulative as the one Dr. Melody Rivers was in with David Twichell. The difficult part was that I had largely based Melody on myself. I now had to really imagine how I would react in those circumstances. I had a mini freak out at one point. It was unnerving to put oneself in the crosshairs of a potential killer. Thus, being able to talk it through with my writing partner was invaluable. The experience of collaboration has made both of us better writers.
FK: After 14 weeks or so, we had finished our story at 17,000 words or so. Our readers enjoyed it and we enjoyed creating it. We’ll be putting it up at Amazon and will do a free weekend if you want to pick it up. You can join our announcement list here.
Some things we learned from the process:
A writing partner can help you have deadlines for your writing
A writing partner who has strengths you do not have can make you a better writer
A writing partner can help you see your characters and their thoughts and actions in a different light
A writing partner can brainstorm plot and character ideas with you and help you both create a more compelling story
A writing partner can act out dialog with you to give it a more “real” feeling for the reader
A writing partner can become a good friend – this was the best part for me.
Once we got the story completed, Meg and I along with our significants met in Gatlinburg for a meal and beers. It was fun and I think Meg and I will be friends for many years to come.
If I don’t murder her.
M: Or I murder him first… See? I always get the final word!
Seems like a match made in heaven… or maybe the jailhouse. Either way, it’s good! 🙂
LikeLiked by 6 people
Al! You’re back ! I want to hear all about the festival! 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Musically, a mixed bag… socially, great fun!
My favourite song of the weekend was New Rose by The Damned, but we also enjoyed some karaoke with Queen (or what’s left of them), danced our asses of to Faithless, saw a bit of Iggy Pop (thankfully not that bit – although he was wearing tight trousers), and had The Who playing in the background as we drank beer by the tent… kinda cool 🙂
LikeLiked by 3 people
That sounds fantastic! Does Paul Rogers still sing with Queen?
LikeLiked by 1 person
No, he was a couple of tours ago. It’s Adam Lambert now, from your X Factor. He camped it up for the occasion!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh wow! I can imagine! Fun! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
I have an iron-clad alibi for that day.
LikeLiked by 2 people
I love you and Kevin together — it’s like I have my family back!
LikeLiked by 3 people
Haha! Thanks, Diane! We’ll work together again, I’m sure!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Good!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Maybe.
LikeLike
I agree with the other commenter that you two sound nicely matched for writing and exploring a story together.
LikeLiked by 1 person
We definitely complemented each other… filling in the gaps in each others weak spots. And we hardly argued at all, which is really kind of amazing, considering the size of Kevin’ ego! Just kidding… 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very fascinating stuff here. B and I just posted 2 collaborations we worked on recently. It’s was interesting to discover how our minds worked together to create a piece. I’d never collaborated with anyone in a writing process before and we’re quite proud of the end result since it was out first time.
Nice to hear of others doing the same. This has given me the confidence to tackle more collaborations in the future.
Congrats on your success. I feel honored that you’ve shared it with all of us. Hope you’re having a great day. Hugs ☺ 🌷
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks, A! Yes, it’s been a great experience for both of us. We enjoyed it immensely and plan on working on something again. It’s really cool to see how two completely different perspectives can form one uniform piece. Your collaboration with Brad seems to working quite well, too! 😃
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! Agreed ☺
LikeLiked by 1 person
I can’t believe you didn’t run screaming, too! Lol! But it sure worked out well in the end! Great collaboration, you guys! 😃
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks, Mari. It was fun!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Looking forward to your next collaboration! Fridays just haven’t been the same!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Maybe this fall!
LikeLiked by 1 person
The two of you work so well together. Will there be a repeat? Your followers want you back together again, kind of like everyone did with The Beatles.
LikeLiked by 4 people
Thank you! Yes, are thinking maybe in the fall.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Cool
LikeLiked by 1 person
This was very insightful. Maybe I need to find a partner. Although I’m pretty sure no one could stand me long enough to complete something! 😀
LikeLiked by 2 people
Oh stop! 😃 I would write with you if I had one spare second left! And maybe we can sometime. Think about it. What you might want to do.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am kind of in the middle of something at the moment myself. But yeah, I struggle to come up with really good ideas… which is why I write what I write…
LikeLiked by 1 person
So when we both have time and a flash of inspiration!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sure. Except that I don’t think my inspirations are as interesting as they need to be!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Well I’m full of plot ideas, so… 😜
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know… but I’m not sure how much I’ll learn writing someone else’s ideas. I think that’s my weakness…
LikeLiked by 1 person
What about a prompt? Or series of prompts?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Maybe…
LikeLiked by 1 person
We could talk it through, step by step. That’s what FK and I did.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Can I tell you… I just read this and in my head, FK meant fuck. Hahaha
LikeLiked by 1 person
😂😂😂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh, that’s really interesting! I’m new here so haven’t read your collaboration but now I want to. FK sounds like quite a guy! 😄
LikeLiked by 2 people
Oh he’s something special for sure! 😜
LikeLiked by 1 person
Both of you are hilarious and good for each other. I totally enjoyed your collaboration 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
The Literary equivalent of Run-DMC and Aerosmith 🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
Ahhh! I love that! Now, tell me.. Which is which? 😀
LikeLike
Which do you prefer?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Tough call… Run DMC dressed all in black so that might be more appropriate for me! 😀
LikeLike
It’s like that and that’s the way it is 😉
LikeLiked by 1 person
Woo hoo! 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
OK, I’ll be honest, initially I was a little jealous that it wasn’t me 😛 But now, I love you guys together! 😀 I think I have to thank Kevin for that, he charmed his way in! 😛
LikeLiked by 1 person
Charmed? More like bull dozed! I am open to another collaboration, my friend!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hahaha bull dozed is an apt word!
Yes, a collaboration someday would be good 😀
LikeLiked by 1 person
Sounds good!
LikeLiked by 1 person
It was such a great collaboration I keep waiting to hear of another one with Kevin and you. Hmmm, I wonder how a three-person collaboration would work (heavens, I’m not talking about me)?
LikeLike