I’ve been following this fantastic group of Chicago writers for a while. This terrifying piece of short fiction is off-the-chart good! I hope you all enjoy!
Drinkers with Writing Problems
The McCluskys had to move again. Despite a two year reprieve, they received another letter. The handwriting was too similar, and the tone was too spot on for it not to be a step closer to the fulfillment of something unwelcome.
Dear McClusky Man, Wife, and Two Little Girls,
It is so delightful seeing you sitting at the kitchen table. I like when Man McClusky is chowing down, still in his work clothes. Sure, the sleeves are rolled up and the tie is ditched, but it looks like he’s about to head back to the office for bit. And that means it’s just a few petite ladies in the house without a tall, slightly muscular man to protect them from a reluctant villain like me who’s just a wee bit tired from suppressing an assortment of urges. The oldest daughter has great legs, and if you keep letting her wear…
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Creepy! What makes it worse is that it was based on some real events? Crazy.
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I know! Terrifying! 😱 it’s a great write, though!
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It was indeed.
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I follow these guys, too. This was scary as hell!
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Yes! I will come to Chicago and we will go hang out with them! 😃
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Cool!
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Pretty awesome and inspiring. It’s amazing what one can do when one puts one’s mind to it. It’s probably surprisingly easy to spy on a family from inside their own home…
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Uh yeah…
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Um, bigtime creepy.
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I know! Totally freaked me out reading it! Which is the mark of good writing though!
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Agreed.
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That was soooooo creeepy! Phew! I bet the family were terrified!
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I know! Chilling!
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I found myself looking over my shoulder to ensure no one was watching me while reading this!! Wow!!
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I know! I thought the story was terrifying! And I just had to share!
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